hey,
this is a great piece of work. very touching...
since im such a great friend, i'll be ** you ( well just a little).
one thing that i think could have made ur poem better is if the lines were a little more equal (it's just a personal preference) but otha then that, i loved it!
ur best friend, share

for lack of a better word, wow... very nice... keep writing
~DB

This is the first poem that rhymes that I saw today!