I absolutely love your poems and their style... thanks for sharing the messages *kayee

It's short, but it's still beautiful. I like it. I love the title of the poem, as well. Nice work.
Tokiko
please check out some of my stuff too, okay? thanks...

it's cool, i like it. your rhythm is a little odd, you start out free-verse and go on to rhyming. its still good tho :-)
~nightmare~