Shoot, The poem isn't supposed to say breath, that's a typo. It's supposed to say breathe. The line otherwise is as it should be, weird as it sounds. Thanks for the reviews you guys! :D

Your poem was written very well. I like how different readers can get a sidderent meaning from it.

Beautiful, going on my favorites. I love the rythm - you definately seem to know what you are doing. The final line is beautiful, though. I'm can't tell you that I know what you meant by it, but I like what I get from it.
Bad news last, right? I think "You can't breath but you can't cry" was meant to be "but can try" or "and you can't try." Other than that, flawless. Keep it up, cheers.