Very nice!
"The face that lied
The face that cried
The face that cannot be denied
Can't you see that it's just tearing me apart"

Great song! I know my Oscar Mayer song sucks, but my friend is the one who posted it. Thanks for letting me know

jake! damm. wat can i say. iy was hot. it was heartfelt and deep. it was romantic and sad. everything peom shud consist of, this wun had it. all ur other work is really good, believe me, i love em all, but i htink u really put a lot of thought and a alot of effort into this on eth emost. i kno who u wrtoe this too how cute! lol but its really good jake. gotta give u props for this one. its my favortie so far. keep n writing, and i'll keep on reading ... -britt

Utterly Amazing, i loved it