And don't you find it ironic that you wrote this before you found out it was your personal card?

Wonderful! I love it! Nice portrayal of the subject; it's something I don't think I've seen done before. The rhythm and rhyme were awesome, I applaud!
chochang913

Beautiful. And of course, angst filled, I love it. It sucked me in, and made my stomach do cartwheels. It was a pleasure to read your work. You are extremly talented, and please, for the the goddess, keep writing.