oh!
may!?!?
the younger sister?
her story now?
yay!
sounds great so far!
update soon?
sonner then soon?
like right now soon?

Nice. Gona update soon~?

Hey!-
Great to see you writing again too. :D
These paragraphs are big, bigger than my paragraphs.
Nice to see some "Revenge" in here, and graphic details too.
Overall, I think you did excellent :D
Whispers In Silence