A drizzle of bittersweetness in this. Every phrase in this piece is dependent on another in order to make this piece what it is. Pretty stable writing. Keep writing, k.

Ok... it works.. lol... Did she actually say that? short but gets the point across.
-Ericka

I agree with one of the other reviewers here. It would seem quite deliciously ironic that the one waiting to be called is doing the calling. The dry, ironic tone is furthered by giving "Beep" its own line. It makes the whole thing seem whimsical and fun, not to mention comically desperate.
Keep writing!
-T.J.

Cute and sweet _

interesting- and realistic. ironic that the person is waiting to be called but calls anyway

hum :( well shes silly then u can do better than her ;)

Short and sweet! A nice poem.

short, but it gets the point across! great job! don't you just love it when people call to say "hi"?

short, but nice. )

deep

Rather short, but to the point. It's quite moving.

Its so short but yet right to the point and to me it seems like a message within leaving a message hehe . So kawaii .

...hm...short yet interesting...i wonder if you really left a voice mail like this...just wondering...