o.O Gah...Update soon!

that was a coold story! Is her dragon look like a dragon or does he have like a human from and a dragon form I am confused.

There was some gramatical erros, and some quirky plothole-esce lines (excuse my nitpicky self). But nevertheless...

Your story has me captivated, it's dark with a vivid-style, and very interesting. Your otherwise writing style is catchy too.

Hope to see updates soon.

((Ps. Will you be making longer chapters, maybe?))

O_O; Wow- it's been a while since I've read a good story- this was a great break in the ice. Update! Well, I'm sure you've probalby gotten reviews like this allready- it's been a while since you've updated- hey, school, and life away from the computer gets to everyone! Just don't forget the story that needs to be completed! Update soon! (And if you get thwe chance, go check out some of my stories!) JA Ne!

Great story so far! please update soon

it is good to know that you are contiuing with this story and i offer you thanks in doing so. i really do enjoy it and do hope that i can read another enstallment in the future

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i like your story! can't wait to see what happens between Nickeya and Raige. please update soon!

a good chapterbecause you updated!although i would suggest to quicken the pace a bit

Good work, skippy. ;)

wowwe! I can't wait to see what Kime has planned :D Yay, I'm glad you moved the plot along a bit more in this chapter- and extremely glad you updated finally! Please post more soon- I can't wait to see what happens! I actually like Kime *turns red* what? The bad guys are quite attractive! And Raige is really nice...makes you wonder if he's got ulterior motives! Love, Carmen

please update soon!

YAY! I really like this story... wait a sec, I really like ALL your stories. Keep it up, Milady writer.

THANK YOU! I've been waiting and waiting for an update on this story! Thank YOU!

The chapter was awesome. KEep up the great story.

oh. my. GOSH! this is an AMAZING story- and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon! Seriously, I hope Kime and Nickeya get together *everyone stares* what? It's always best when the prisoner goes with the captor! :) Your style and dialogue are excellent, and I can't believe you've only written four chapters and gotten me hooked! -Carmen ps. PLEASE UPDATE! PLEASE!