Reviews for Of Minds and Murder

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Samana Cay 2007-11-10 ch 5,	abuseAGACK! i can not believe how amazingly entertaining i found this. please write more??
Samana Cay 2007-11-09 ch 1,	abuseokaay so you havent updated for quite some years and i'm only on the first chapter but OH. MY. GOSH. THAT WAS LIKE... SO GOOD! had i been home alone, i would have roared with laughter just thinking of steve martin song. but alas, my family would mock me endlessly if they heard me
EyeChan 2005-05-19 ch 5, anon.	abuse...taps foot..pokesNow this is one story that needs updating... it's really good so far!Please? puppyeyes
pyro36x 2004-11-14 ch 5,	abuseo you have to update. not only this story but the other tut one as well. also if you have any recomaondations
love this. 2004-10-07 ch 5,	abuseUpdate soon? Puppy eyes... I really really like it! And you have to update soon! Or readesr like myself will b forced to move onto a different story! Even so, I'll be watching! :P Update soon!
pneumothorax 2004-08-20 ch 5,	abusesevere prodding It must be updated, it's just got interesting :) ooh, I hope she asks him in an incredibly blunt way what perhaps was lol. anyway, I really like the mystery you've put in (I forgot to say that last review) with the murder etc. heh, anyway. keep writing :D
pneumothorax 2004-08-20 ch 4,	abuseSlightly confused about the marriage. She and her father couldn't rival it because they're.. too low down on the 'how are you list' ? and the same goes for abasi? emails you anyway, it's interesting. first egyptian fic I've reaf - way better than I thought it'd be. I like the way tut (spelt wrong most likely) and her interact. It's interesting :)
elohimdancer319 2004-07-13 ch 5,	abusegood story. can't wait to see more. KB
Voice.Hear.Me 2004-06-30 ch 5,	abuseExcellent story so far!
vanessa 2004-06-28 ch 5, anon.	abuseI love your story. Keep on writin' :)
Misoshiru 2004-06-26 ch 5,	abusegood chapter. interesting and sweet, although im a bit confused about the living arrangements because technically tahi would have to go back to her home and i thought she was supposed to be marrying that other dude. and Tankh should have known this when she explained to him about Osahar. o well, its your story. update soon!
Moniqua 2004-06-24 ch 5,	abuseOkey dokey...I've read both yours and Tessandra's stories...and nothing strikes me as plagarized...so don't sweat it. Just keep it coming, you're doing great!
CelesteDeVive 2004-06-13 ch 5,	abuseThey are similar in certain aspects but not enough for anyone to deem it plagarism. Did you notice that Nahbia's sister, Meskhenet, is married toa man named Rashidi? Thought that was a bit odd. I do enjoy your story though. You have a talent.
me 2004-06-13 ch 5, anon.	abusesee the similarity between Tessandra's story and your own is what drew me. I had read Tess' story and liked it and when I found yours of SIMILAR plotline(because we all know that a solidly original plot is unknown nowadays) I was drawn and fell in love with the story - I actually like it better because it has grown so different. There are so many stories about one girl going back/back and forth/switching places but rarely have a read any where one person of who can observe the life of another and the other observe the life of one. Its original and far from plagarism...especially since the defintinon is the conscious intent to take one's ideas and thoughts as their own. you didn't have the conscious intent and therefore can rule that out. good luck!
Cheers 2004-06-11 ch 3, anon.	abuseAll right, I know how much this will annoy you, but I'm going to say it anyway: This is (at least the first chapter) startlingly similar to my friend Tessandra's story. I realize that you got the premise from a different book, and that's cool, but the situations in the first chapter are almost identical to those in Tess's chapter. While this may be marked by the differences between the whole "Being of Two Minds" bit with Leigh and Tahi talking to each other, there are several things that should not need to be controlled by the fact that King Tut is in the story. Tahi's father is an artisan rebuilding a temple. So is Nabia's. Nabia has two seperate lives/ consciousnesses (is that a word?). So does Tahi. When Tahi sees the king, she does not kneel, but is told to by the vizier, who asks her "Are you just going to stand there?" This also happens to Nabia. When Nabia falls to the ground, she chokes on the dust. When Tahi falls to the ground, she makes a point of saying she is lucky she did NOT fall on dust so that she wouldn't choke. Tahi is chased to the site by her annoying suitor. So is Nabia. These huge similarities take away from the story which, in the second chapter, takes of on its own. This could ruin a reader's experience of the story itself if they have already read "Across Times and Oceans." I'm not trying to flame you and I'm sorry if I come off that way, but I think it detreacts immensely from your story to have these continue to be included.

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