You better get started,
We've only begun
The end is far from near
When I unfreeze the sun.
*dies* AH! PERFECT! CAN I USE THIS POEM IN ONE OF MY STORIES?!PRETTY PLEASE! I'LL GIVE YOU CREDIT!

I'm dead serious when I say this. This is the best you've written. You've improved over the years Peacock! *grins* MWAHAHAHA! Whatever... You didn't steal a few lines from others cause you can do that sometimes... lol! Your poems are really unique. They're kind of like free verse and blah blah blah. I love your unique style Peacock! Keep it up Peacock!

If I didn't know you, I suggest therapy as well. Gotta love it, though. LOVE
DICE

Nice job overall. I didn't find anything I would consider wrong with it.