"Love must remember" is a really sweet line. this is just so gentle and beautiful...really, like a nice winter day. Great job.
-God bless-

Wow..Beautiful... Keep up the awesome work!

"the birth of vision" is a really beautiful phrase. i loved it

As the cliche goes, 'short but sweet.' Excellent use of less for more, if that makes sense. A very serene feeling comes along with this piece, or rather, that's what is evoked. A lot of tranquil nature imagery helped the piece; especially great was 'Lived were quieter days.' Great work!