nicely written the first stanza is especially powerful

This is good, it captures the feelings very well in just a few simple words. Well done! :-)

Wow...that's really sad:(
I have one titled Abuse, but it's slightly different.
Great job:D

hitting another person is so fricken stupid. i sorry if it really happens though, but yeah. how sad. *TI*

Thats cool, If you expand it would make a cool song.

A short poem, but very very powerful. I don't think I've read a poem that powerful before. The flow is perfect and so is the rhyming. Nice piece.