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| moneymakestheworldgoround 2007-11-06 ch 37,  | abuselol. sweet. :) maybe u should say that this story's complete? coz i wasn't rly sure at first... so yeah. :) anyway, rly liked this. a good read. *thumbs up* :D |
| Emmie1000 2006-10-02 ch 37, | abuseNow this is good quality reading if ever there is, you should be very proud of this little beauty. I hope to see your writtings in the future |
| unrequitedx 2006-05-06 ch 37, | abuseOh my god... that's an AWESOME story... this is such a nice story. LOVE IT! |
| unrequitedx 2006-05-02 ch 2, | abusehahahaha, his "interest" hahahahah, xD |
| Alohababie03 2006-01-30 ch 1, | abuseLove the story! |
| LurkerForever 2006-01-12 ch 37, | abuseWow. Wow. And Wow again. I started reading it and couldnt stop. The story draws you in and just keeps you there. I wouldnt mind watching the movie of this in the near future you know ^^. It would make SUCH a good one. OR maybe a book! yeah! and ill buy it and give it to my grandchilder saying "Heres a story that includes a lot of romance/drama and it was one of my favorites when i was your age". Keep Up the good work and may you have success in the near future with whatever you do. God Bless you =) |
| ignis.et.tenebrae 2005-12-25 ch 37, | abuseThis was a great story! I was glad for a happy ending, because for a while, I wan't sure if you would have one! Congratulations on finishing, (it is, as you know, harder than it looks,) and Merry Christmas! ~Ignis |
| squeeze-box 2005-09-25 ch 37, | abusewow! this story is AMAZING. I spent all afternoon reading this story, and it was time well spent. I've read your other stories and they're just as good. Well done! PS I hate Kim :D |
| becxfok01 2005-05-18 ch 37, | abuseThis is a really sweet story! Keith sounds wonderful and Gwen sounds cool too. Ashley sounded like a great friend, too bad she couldn't stay to the end of the story. It was sweet to see Warren become nice for the baby. And to be honest, I still think Kim is a horrible girl. Anyways, just wanted to say well done with this story! |
| kamma7292 2005-05-17 ch 37, | abuseThis was such a great story! I started reading it last night, and finished the remainder of it today! It was so good! You should make this into a novel someday. I hope to see more from you! |
| JenniRose 2005-05-12 ch 37, | abuseI really liked your story. I found it one night when I was in the mood for a good romantic story, and I started reading it, and at first I didn't think I would finish it since I NEVER read anything this long, but obviously I really enjoyed it, or I wouldn't have spent the past couple weeks reading it. Good job! |
| jaquinta 2005-05-04 ch 37, anon. | abuseHey there! Great ending! It has been my pleasure to read such fine work. I hope you continue to write such intriguing and heart wrenching stories. Good Luck and Best Wishes! |
| Close Your Eyes and Dream 2005-05-03 ch 37, | abusegreat chapter! keep updating! |
| Marianna5 2005-05-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseWow, I knew I loved this story, but I didn't know how much until I read the ending...I felt so sad! I've grown quite attached to this story, especially Gwen, since I can identify with her a lot. Even so, you wrote a terrific happy ending - not mushy but sweet. BRILLIANT work. You're a really talented writer, and I can't wait to read more of your stories! I'm definitely a fan. |
| Madcow13 2005-05-03 ch 37, | abuseGreat ending. Warren's obsessed with law but we already knew that... I noitced a mistake in about the middle of the chapter. It says: I would never tell not to be friends with her." I think you want a 'you' in there between tell and not. Apart from that I think you've got it covered. Anyway, excellent work. I loved it! |