lol. sweet. :)

maybe u should say that this story's complete? coz i wasn't rly sure at first... so yeah. :)

anyway, rly liked this. a good read. *thumbs up*

:D

Now this is good quality reading if ever there is, you should be very proud of this little beauty. I hope to see your writtings in the future

Oh my god... that's an AWESOME story... this is such a nice story. LOVE IT!

hahahaha, his "interest" hahahahah, xD

Love the story!

Wow. Wow. And Wow again. I started reading it and couldnt stop. The story draws you in and just keeps you there. I wouldnt mind watching the movie of this in the near future you know . It would make SUCH a good one. OR maybe a book! yeah! and ill buy it and give it to my grandchilder saying "Heres a story that includes a lot of romance/drama and it was one of my favorites when i was your age". Keep Up the good work and may you have success in the near future with whatever you do. God Bless you )

This was a great story! I was glad for a happy ending, because for a while, I wan't sure if you would have one! Congratulations on finishing, (it is, as you know, harder than it looks,) and Merry Christmas!

Ignis

wow! this story is AMAZING. I spent all afternoon reading this story, and it was time well spent. I've read your other stories and they're just as good. Well done!

PS I hate Kim :D

This is a really sweet story! Keith sounds wonderful and Gwen sounds cool too. Ashley sounded like a great friend, too bad she couldn't stay to the end of the story. It was sweet to see Warren become nice for the baby. And to be honest, I still think Kim is a horrible girl. Anyways, just wanted to say well done with this story!

This was such a great story! I started reading it last night, and finished the remainder of it today! It was so good! You should make this into a novel someday. I hope to see more from you!

I really liked your story. I found it one night when I was in the mood for a good romantic story, and I started reading it, and at first I didn't think I would finish it since I NEVER read anything this long, but obviously I really enjoyed it, or I wouldn't have spent the past couple weeks reading it. Good job!

Hey there! Great ending! It has been my pleasure to read such fine work. I hope you continue to write such intriguing and heart wrenching stories. Good Luck and Best Wishes!

great chapter! keep updating!

Wow, I knew I loved this story, but I didn't know how much until I read the ending...I felt so sad! I've grown quite attached to this story, especially Gwen, since I can identify with her a lot. Even so, you wrote a terrific happy ending - not mushy but sweet. BRILLIANT work. You're a really talented writer, and I can't wait to read more of your stories! I'm definitely a fan.

Great ending. Warren's obsessed with law but we already knew that... I noitced a mistake in about the middle of the chapter. It says: I would never tell not to be friends with her." I think you want a 'you' in there between tell and not. Apart from that I think you've got it covered. Anyway, excellent work. I loved it!