Very compelling start.

uh...anything before...heh..well now... would be null and void! this was on old chapters that have been removed as editing has taken place...

oh believe me confusion is the least of his worries...

OMG! First of all I really do not want to know what your sudden inspiration was, secondly, HOW COULD YOU CONFUSE LUCE LIKE THAT! YOU'RE SO CRUEL TO HIM!

Hugs and kisses from your sister,

Starbound

please write more. I notice that you haven't written in awhile (on either of your stories).. but write more.

haha Luce was gunna kill angel! too bad he didn't. then Fey could have him!