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| Ezzara Santo'Caballero 2004-02-09 ch 1,   | Hey, great piece... so much feeling, it's wonderful. I imagined these two stanzas as the last of maybe a larger poem, so mayhaps you could expand. It's just a thought. Keep it up, this is wonderful. "Follow your heart, follow your pen." - Ezz |