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Only in Dreams
MsWriter
2004-02-09 . chapter 1
sounds very serene and pretty, but sad because you are alone is such beauty.
cosmo-queen
2004-02-06 . chapter 1
Good poem, with some nice imagery. The ending is sad and unexpected though. Just a couple of spelling errors- "due" should be "dew" and "scrumshus" should be "scrumptious". Keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
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