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| MsWriter 2004-02-09 ch 1,  | abusesounds very serene and pretty, but sad because you are alone is such beauty. |
| cosmo-queen 2004-02-06 ch 1, | abuseGood poem, with some nice imagery. The ending is sad and unexpected though. Just a couple of spelling errors- "due" should be "dew" and "scrumshus" should be "scrumptious". Keep writing :) *cosmo-queen* |