Doesn't make any sense...but then, poetry generally doesn't...have a headache now...First the soul is mortal? Then immortal? Oh whatever, I'll leave you to it. *grabs Tylenol*

Impressive! The thoughts portrayed through this poem are very deep and well thought-out. Is this written from a thiest point of view? The idea of enduring love and souls reliving suggests that it is religious.
The message of this poem, however, I thought was a little ambiguous. Where are the answers to the initial questions derived from? This is a spiritual piece, but is this spirituality of faith in Christianity or reincarnation? Alternatively, does the prospect reliving lie in rememberance of the past? As the poet trying to get across a message to the reader, you must specify which message you wish to give and what the purpose of the writing is, whether it be a statement inspired by Christianity, the prospect of reincarnation or a consideration of the power of remembrance.
Although your message and purpose seem a little ambiguous, you have presented a nevertheless thought provoking poem, and I recommend that you continue to write analytically about a broad range of subjects to enhance your ability to write and think about each concept in depth, and present it as a poem. (In other words, keep writing!)

Beautiful... my favorite of yours, it's absolutely wonderful. Keep it up, your talent truly shines here as well as in your other works.
- Ezz