The author's notes were hilarious. Wow. It's so true. Good job on this one especially. It brought a tear to my eye :P

Yes, you're very subtle.

Hmm, you've said what I'm too polite to mention. Very true about writing angsty poetry for the right purpose. This is one is quite satirical. And because it's meant to be that way I won't say a word. ;)

*rotflmao* This is awesome. I've seen so many poems like thses that it isn't funny XD However, your poems are about 32462356 billion times more amusing...

An amazing collection of 'really bad angst poems'. You've done a good job at highlighting the extreme stupidy of the whole angst genre.

LOL.

Ew. Plums. Healthy food. EEK!

Death sounds HOT!

Eww skin flakes. I love all of your poems

Ridiculous nonsense and totally pointless descriptions...
I still love these!

Stiil quite funny, love the way rhyme brought the tone of this down!
The only critiscm I have is the line lengths of,
"Until I had to get you out of your room with a crowbar
But now I'm here with nothin' to do 'cuz this is a slow bar"
They sort of spoil the mocking tone.
I loved,
It worms into my heart
Like a poison-tipped dart"
Its over blown and out of proportion!

That was awful.
That was trully awful.
That wasn't even poetry, more prose.
And you know what?
That was the best parody I have read in a long time! It really helped put that sort of poety into a different perspective.

Hehe, that was so awesome! Kepp em coming!
Shanna

I laugh, I love, you really should be put of for idol worship.
Tee hee.
Oh dear she exploded again.
CLEANUP ON FILE SECTION THREE
pixie bits are difficult cleen ya know.

Okay, yeah. I REALLY like your poetry. Theirs something almost comforting about it. Everyone speaks different languages, and it’s nice to be bi-lingual. (Yeah if that makes sense to you. You are a poet) anyways, your good and you can only get better. (in other words write more)