Ooh nice job, I liked it alot!! =D
And thanky-you for reviewing my poem. That made me so smiley.
There's this magazine-thingy at my skool, and they wouldn't publish one of my best friend's poems, which was really good. Yet they accepted a horribly written one about this random girl who decided not to kill herself-complete with a really bad rhythem and horribly forced rhyming that didn't make sense. The skool people are dumb like that.

I like this one to. great jo and I agree with what you are saying

poetry... a great way to let your feelings out. That sux that they didn't publish it... wonder why... i think your poems are pretty good :/ can't see why they didn't... don't worry, just keep on writing to your heart's desire. Who cares what others may think, at least please yourself first. Live life to the fullest and don't be afraid to take risks and grasp new opportunities! :)

I like it. It flows really nicely, and it has a good message. Nicely written. Keep on writing.