Yet another delightful story! I adore your writing, it's just so beautiful. I hope to see more in the future.

Ok I had to review this chap too! I LOVE IT! ...and yet I want to cry more... ::does so:: Yeah umm I typed the wrong Email in the last review...
XD
It's DarkCyrstal1300@aol.com sorry 'bout that lol not that you'd email me anyway...
OH PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
~Your Friend
Tara-Chan the forgetful-one

::cries:: I LOVE IT! YOU ARE OFFICIALLY ONE OF MY HEROS! Along with Jeoal... T.I. Hudson... all my other author friends who pity me and say behind my back, "Tara's Writing is crap."
::refers to self in third person:: Why can't Tara's writing come out so beautifully!? Is it because Tara is lazy.. probably...
But Tara sees CAN write... Tara just can't type
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Tara is getting on your nerves isn't she? I mean aren't I! >_

i like this story allot! you should update it more often though.

I love this story! I think it's lovely, and really well-written. It's a beautiful story, it actually made me cry, and you have no idea what a compliment that is :)

Angst! So much angst! And yet I keep reading hoping for the happy resolution. *sniff* they will end up 2gether right? *hopeful puppy dog eyes* Btw I still am in luv w/ ur stlye...so god. I'm a lil jealous. Sorry I can't help w/ accents. I suck at those. Update soon. Pleaze!

I luv ur style so much. Particularly the intro. so poetic. very high class writing. And Y oh Y is the world so unfair. If I didn't kno (from the intro and commonsense) that they were going 2 end up 2gether I would have throw a fit. I don't care wut must b done but there will b a happily ever after ending for them...rite. *puppy dog eyes*

O. i love it. All of that anguish the poor things. Please write more!

Very pretty~ xD Nate is highly. . .amusing. ^.~
And. . .you are very, very allowed to shoot me. I didn't email you the edits ever, did I? I . . . think I remember why that happened. Crud. SORRY! *hands head* u.u;
I love this story~ It's the bestest ever. ^^ I will wait impatiently for more. :3

*applauds*
Nice. Okay, I have to say that this is really good so far. I'm really looking forward to chapter 3, and I wish I could be of help with the dialouge, but that should relate to the character, so it's really more up to you to figure it out. *hugs* Good luck!

Sometimes I wonder why I keep visiting this site.
Then I realise it's because of people like you.
I can't explain to you how delighted I was when I stumbled across this little piece of professional, cultivated fiction in the dubious ranks of FictionPress fantasy authors.
I have to say, the title and your pen name had me a little doubtful, at first. They smell of generic 'romantic' fantasy to me. But I was pleasantly surprised when I actually bothered to read this.
You've got style. You've got class. You don't seem to have included any glaring anachronisms, at least to my uneducated eye. Nothing sound overtly modern, the language if deft and well-handled, and you can actually write a love scene well.
A few times your sentences have been a little awkward, but it's a minor hiccup in the easy flow of your prose.
The only problem in language I've found here was in chapter two.
The Lady says something about 'As benefits your status'.
I think you mean 'As befits your status.'
I'm glad to here that there's someone on this site who bothers to edit before they realease a chapter.
You just made the list. Not a hit list, if that's what your thinking. You've reached my favourite authors list, an honour accorded to few (sarcasm, I'm not really that up myself).
Well done. I'll be eagerly awaiting furthur installments.

Like this a lot, their love is very cute and strong and powerful, their exchanges realistic, I want another chapter, and while you're at it, another chapter of "I'm here" would be nice too.
*Begs*

[chuckles.] A review ** huh? tsk tsk.. maybe you should be put inna chastity belt?

=^-^=
well written! keep going, must make this short. sorry

~twirls his fingers in mock amusement~ That was realy well written, I liked the intro. I don't know whats up with the council of the day thing and all that jazz but I still enjoyed this story, congrats.