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| Cryptic Insanity 2004-03-02 ch 1, | Nice poem ^_^ I love how the lines seem to flow and when you went to decribe the lips you didn't stop at honey =b |
| Non-existent Puritanism 2004-02-24 ch 1, | Hey this was a cool poem...I liked... |
| AntiPleasure 2004-02-22 ch 1, | Very lovely imagery in this I must say, about the night time.. and very very romantic. Jenna xx |
| mezzie 2004-02-19 ch 1, | this is so lovely, i just want to fall into its cosmic sense of stars, fireflies, all these points of passion are beautiful. i adore the first three lines. and the rest of it. so nice, this is going to be a favourite of mine. mezzie |
| M. Turnbull 2004-02-12 ch 1, | Amazing, purely amazing! I imagined it all and was really upset the it was over so quickly! *pouts* Great to read you're work again anyway! Sorry it took me so long to read it though :S! |