is this story... finished? O.o
well, i give you an A...
try more drama-ish stuffies when whe finds out her best friend tattled... maybe say something about speed of heart, or color of face, or what thoughts rushed through her head, or more detail on expression of face... i dunno, just do soemthing cuz it seems a little... not detailed enough... i dunno, im just a stupid froshie =P

This is very good! Please update this soon, I can't wait for more!
PS: If you can, plz check out my stories.