 Edana 2004-04-12 . chapter 1You definitely have an interesting style of writing - very dream-like, beautifully descriptive, only really brushing against the real details. Poetic. I'm not entirely sure what's going on, but I guess that's the point since there are so many unanswered questions, but it's intriguing! I especially liked the image of the falling white feathers fading into the snow. I wonder where you're going with this ^^ |