This is also good, but next time try to make your chapters shorter, but it's good that you acknowledge that you know it's short! I also feel that sometimes ending a chapter short is good, it keeps the readers suspensful. Anyhow, good job. I wish you and your...fluffy bunnies of doom good luck! I'll review for of your stuff later! :D

-Alareic-

PS. Hate Math? join the Fellow Math Haters (FMH). Just review one of my stories, or Shadow Gryphon's and say you want to join FMH. Also, do you think you could review my story "Beep"? thanks!

Wow, this is really good! Thank you for reviewing Death's Apprentice a few months back. I am updating it soon! I'll review the next chapter.

-Alareic-

wow! really great story! I hope you update soon!

Your right it was short. But is was a very good chapter. Update soon.

er...wow..that was...confusing... but unusual and interesting

O, some action. You're right, it's short, but I enjoyed it anyway. But for having such a short chapter, I must imply you to update sooner. Doesn't that sound like a good idea? I should probably take my own advice though, as far as updating goes anyway.
Phoenix

Hm, interesting, very interesting. You've certaintly caught my attention with this one. It's a good start, an attention getter and it sure enough made me want to read more. Update soon.
Phoenix

Starts out great but gets a little confusing at the end. Your idea sounds interesting. Death having a particular likeng to one girl and only one man to save her.

hm...this starts out rather confusing... however, it sounds interesting... death likes the rei girl, ne?