I have nothing to say.
Except that this story is something that I've been hoping to read my whole life yet didn't get around to write it.
I. Am. Utterly. Shocked.
You write so wel!! x I am so happy I got around to read it.
I love the personalities of all the characters, you've written them well. Although sometimes there are these minor mistakes that can be corrected. You should get a Beta to edit this story for you, because I can definitely see the possibility.
This story is simply A.M.A.Z.I.N.G. and utterly B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L.
Please keep updating! I look forward to the next chapter! XD
Delineations . Alyona

this storys so sad Feilia is due some happness after everything she went thru
cant wait for more x

I love how you didnt make this story all nice and non-realistic. I cant stand story in which the supposedly "evil" guys are nice and doesnt harm the main "heroine" character. it just doesnt have a realistic sense to it. i mean it is sad that she got hurt but. well i love the way its going, so keep it up.

That move WAS EVIL! But its ok, more to read next chapter>.

wow, this story is so well written that i am just gobsmacked. i read this story when it started quite some time ago and i've been sucked in so deeply...then my computer crashed and i couldn't find this story again :P

today, i found it again and boy am i glad i did. your writing if anything has improved (not that it was even bad to begin with). every chapter really draws me in and the storyline is just so beautifully crafted. this is honestly publishable stuff you've got here and i sincerely hope you don't give up on this amazing story. really anticipating the next chapter!

Yeah you are evil D:
This is a freaking great story(:
I'm dying to know the next part XD

I am going to say one thing: DON'T LET THIS BE THE END! I lie this story way to much for this to be the ending (not that it's a good ending I am just in denial :P )

Sincerely Nephilim Familiar

you have a good creative idea with your plot, but i gotta be honest, you can make their grammar a little better. when uum what's his name careilo? when he spoke about her hands, he was all like 'who did that to you? i will kill them!!' made him sound desperate and not like a calm, quiet killer ya know? i felt like it should have been a more tense, short-cut, and to the point sentence he should have said instead of that? a quiet 'who did that to you?' and your explanation can be saying something like 'and the threat hung heavy in the air, he needs to say no more, his meaning: kill the person responsible. i don't know something like that.

WOAHH! Talk about intense and cute... Do I see a baby in the near future..?
Well written and good ideas.

woah.

awsome
update soon

Wow...this is really, really good. I love the characters that you've introduced into the story, even the supporting ones. Love the story. The plot is awesome ;)

I love your story!
I've been following it for about a year now, and I can't get enough.
The lack of updates is dissapointing though, so could you please update soon?

Wow! i don't think i've ever cried so much during a story.. like ever, it's amazing, keep writing your doing an awesome job.

xoxo indijana

Ok, I've read all thirteen chapters so far, and I have to say...SQUEE! ME LOVE! I can't wait for the next one, it's sweet, it's dramatic, it's mysterious...I just...Squee! I'm lovin' evry word of it, and good story plot, I wish I could make one as good as yours...keep up the good work!!