hehe, i love this so far. my new favorite story of yours =D plz update! UPDATE! and endless onslaught too... update... ^_^

lol, this story is funny ^_^ it's very interesting. i want anchovy pizza now =D

This story is just getting interesting! Please keep writing!
x barerie x

LOL this is great. Takeru is already a lovable character. Keep writing.
x barerie x

Wai Jenny loves your story! +_+ It's cute but kinda sad at the same time, even though it's only 2 chappies in. UPDATE, TRA-CHAN!! Takeru reminds me of Shinji from Neon Genesis Evangelion, for some reason. (the patheticness? maybe) Anyway, keep up the great work! ERk... I need to post a story up, before they kill my account o_o

Hi update! nice fic by the way!(",)

hey it was really cool.Stitch also say to PLEASE hurry and get chapter 3 up PLEASE. I like the part with the cats, that was funny.

oh. Cool new story...but this means that you're ignoring your old ff.net stories...
Happy B-day! (yeah, it's kinda belated, but the server was down yesterday)

*raises hand* i wouldnt mind going out with a delivery boy!! pick me! heh...alrighty then ^_^'; heh... okay, great chappie! update soon! i'll be in touch ^_^
~Raven

coolies! i like it ^_^ lol, anchovy pizza ^_^ heehee!! alrighty then, im under the weather today, so i needed something to read. and i found your story! wow, imagine that ^_^ lol. anywho, your summary got cut off, so i wanted to know about it ^_^ lolies! anywho, gr8 story so far! im gonna read on =)
~Raven

i hate my compy. i had a BIG SNAZZY REVIEW all typed up and ready to go, but NO, my compy wont LET ME DO ANYTHING RIGHT...wah. i even had a joke about miguelin in it...shucks. TAKERU IS FUN TO CHAASE~!!

Another really good chapter. Poor Takeru; to like a girl so much ya can't breath! And just why IS he friends with Jei? I like Jei though, he's a good older brother.
TTFN- E.J.

This is a good and funny first chapter.
Very cute.
Looking forward to the second chapter!

It's very good so far. I hope you will continue. *hinthint*

Continue please!