O.o Your little brother is good! Just like you. -

hey this is really good tell your brother he's a pretty good writer-sammy-

wow, this is realy good,

Morbid, yet calmly so. The style hints well of the insanity and horror. Absolutely lovely.

You mispelles they in the begining, but other than that, wow. Very dark and deep. I have often wondered what a wall could have seen or lived through. Who was there before me and what happened to them. I think your bro should write more.

Dark...wow. Tell your bro this is good. Cuz it really is!

o0o0o0. Your brother's good! Give him props for me! Yeah, um. . . how old is he? Great!

That was pretty good. Go him.

wow, your brothers is really good. how old is he?