wonderful

Thats cool your really good.

wahoo! again, i admire people who can rhyme. sounds tolkienish. of course it would, as that seems to be one of the very few genres that you will read! (cough cough read enders game cough cough because cough cough orson scott card is awesome cough cough)

I really like this; it seems to have a natural tune to it (or at least it fits the tune I came up with, I guess). Reminds me a lot of Brian Jacques' Redwall books, for some weird reason. Have you read any of them? If you haven't, you should. Start with Redwall by Brian Jacques and go from there. Thankies bunches for the review of Laewyrr's Pawn, maybe that'll encourage me to write more =)

Well written and a very upbeat poem.
*Seeing Starz*