Hehe, Ponteh here, sorry it took me so long to get back to you!

Great chappie, aw two couples down! *cheer*

One small inconsistency:
“If I had a bunch of girls chasing after me, how would you feel?” - if I remember correctly, upon reaching the festival Eric was attracting a good deal of attention from girls (the 45 year-old blowing kisses... ew) because he was dressed up and stuff.

So cute, keep up the good work! :D

Tee hee heI love tiffany. She is AWESOME! *cracking up*Nice chappie, loved it. Sucks to be eric. He's so mean ;_; but I guess anybody would be if they had an evil little virus eating them @_@ Keep up the great work annie! WE LOVE YOU WE'LL MISS YOU KEEP IN TOUCH OR WE'LL KILL YOU! (you can always call any of us if you're having problems or you just wanna talk, great luck in college! we'll miss you!)

I really like it so far. It's really well written and I like the story so far. I can't wait until I get fo finish it.

it isn't the end at all! *sigh* i loved this chapter- was in bad need of intensive ficpress reading, so i found your story to catch up with! Keep writing, i'd like to know what's going to happen with those two (tiffany and eric)...

XD great ending.
I love this! This is a completely and totally awesome chapter! *dying of laughter*
Hahaha the proverbial shower. Gotta love it.
(ranannia: you would... *grumble*
pont: *innocent smile*)
~Ponteh

excellent excellent excellent. I really like the way the story is progressing. I'm lovin the accidental nudity and awkward moments. Tons of histarical moments. C'mon annie, where do you come up with these superb ideas. Is there something going on in your mind that I don't know about? ^_- Anyway, you almost made me cry at the point when Eric found his mother, and that's hard to do. I don't cry easily. Excellent decriptions. One common error i noticed though was how u used the word revenge. Normally you don't say: "I will revenge the Demons", but instead say, "I will get revenge on the demons" or "I will avenge my parents by killing the demons" or something like that. I'm looking forward to the next update. BTW, where do you come up with these poems, their great!^_^

Another great chapter! I'm enjoying this story a lot! Keep up the good work! Oh, and just so you know, your english is a lot better than some native speakers I know, so be encouraged!

What?! The end?! No no of course, you're just jokin' 'round. UPDATE! Ok?! and this is a second language fic...?
You're just too good... that's all i'm willing to say!

Hey, for a second-language fic this is pretty good...hey, it's pretty good for a first language fic too! I am really enjoying this story...make sure to keep up with it!

I found the poem interesting, so i DID read the story as well. Well written. i liked Chapter 12 the best. Keep writing-u're good!

Hi! Sorry I haven't reviewed you in a while, but my internet is messed up and freezes at random, sometimes even when the screen is coming up. So it's finally working...at the moment.
line 1: change 'as big and beautiful' to 'bigger and more beautiful'
line 8: did you cut off Anna's line by mistake?
line 23: change 'long big windows' to 'big long windows' - it just flows better
line 34: change 'shrunk' to 'shrank' to fit the tense (BTW, you are doing A LOT better on the tenses. Good job!)
line 39: change 'blushed' to 'blushing'
line 41: change the comma after the quote to a period and start a new sentence with 'he'
line 46: change the comma after the quote to a period
line 49: add 'into' after 'might get'
line 65: change 'deep' to 'deeply'
line 76: add 'been' between 'He's' and 'down'
line 77: add a comma after 'knew' and change 'was him trying' to 'he was trying'
change 'been' to 'being'
line 81: change 'folded' to 'fold', add 'his' right after, change 'sat' to 'sit'
line 83: change 'isn't he' to 'is he'
line 91: change 'personalities' to 'personality'
line 92: change 'grows up' to 'grew up'
line 94: change 'which was' to 'which is'
line 98: delete the last word, 'it'
line 99: change 'he can't' to 'he couldn't'
line 104: change 'gets' to 'got'
line 37 from the bottom: change 'having' to 'to have'
line 27 from the bottom: change 'giving you' to 'to give you'
I love the chapter! It's really good! A storm's coming! Must go!

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CLIFFHANGER
ME HATE CLIFFHANGER!

Your story is really good so far! I like the character development and the pacing is very good! There a few spelling mistakes and the past and present pretexes were mixed up sometimes. Other then that though the story is really good! The plot is interesting and exciting. I'm looking forward to reading more! Keep up the good work!

Hello people! Its your lovable author Death-Hunter!! *sounds of people puking and coughing* Da...whatever...
After looking through all the chapters, I must say that you've really improved, and a lot at that. Your style of writing the story gotten better than the first few chapters and all, :). I must say though, Anna really got over her parents death pretty quickly...:)
Anyway, I will have to find time to re-read all the chapters as now its night time, my brain probably translated the story wrongly to me, always happen at night, hee...

You're kidding, right? Eric's not really dead... right?
Interesting story so far. I really hope that you continue- I'd like to see what will happen to everyone.