This poem is equivalent to being drunk, being high. Though I never have before... But it made me high, it actually stirred me up a bit. Very hot... Love the ending!

i love it as i do all your other pieces of work. your work has inspired me to want to fuck you

nice

This is interesting.. your detail is interesting... very interesting indeed...

Interesting. Very interseting. I really am not having a good day with being insane. Don't ask...
Ankh

The element of random meter disorientates your reader, we don't know where to pause or where to flow. More transitions would be a nice thing to add, jumping from one thing to the next confuses us adle minded fools.

Wow, that was VERY good. I liked the rhythem and pace, it was like music in itself. It added alot to it. KU-DOS!
Reine Faye

This is SO good! like the whole way it was written, the pattern itself, was just Unique and well done. the ending was definitly good! "Where are my clothes?" hahaha keep up the good work!

um...WOW...You go girl! I love it - disturbing, freaky, gothic, sexual - all you my dear - lol I'll compliment more when I see ya tomorrow - peace!

this shouldent make me giggle...but it does...i like it a lot.