 ribbons-paws 2009-02-01 . chapter 6Aw... that was so cute! Perfect love... being best-est best-est best-est friends with that person and later, that friendship blossomed to love... -day dreaming state- :P |
 emerald 2006-09-18 . chapter 6 Aww. |
 pinkfluffyoranges 2005-03-20 . chapter 7ah the perfect story to go to bed after reading, yay i realy like thi story it seemed so much more realistic then most story's out to day. lik enot being able to afford more milk, i thought that was really important. |
 Dragonwolf83 2004-12-19 . chapter 6Now this I like. There are bits where its possible to see where it wasn't your best but that happens with everyone and its only more visible on short stories. Ricardo was so over the top that he actually works!! Good writing style and on a side note I live in the black hole ;) |
 Phoenix Kiss 2004-12-16 . chapter 6Wow, I just completely loved this story. I read it through in one sitting, and that one chapter, where Rob cried, well, it brought tears to my eyes. And normally I'm not into guys crying, but I was so drawn into the story; you related the characters' emotions well. LOL I was reading this, and I was so drawn into it that I got ** off at anyone who interupted me. It was just so cute! Even though I don't quite agree with the sex thing, but well, it made their make up at the end more appreciated.
And what makes it better, is that it's not cliche. I mean, cliche is hot, I like it, but it's good to have a change once and awhile. Hehe, well, anyway, I'll go check out that sequel now. ^_~; |
 YourLastRegret 2004-06-06 . chapter 7Yes! Another story would be /greatly/ appreciated! You are a great writer and, unlike me, you can actually finish a story successfully. ^_^ Keep writing! |
 iriscristata 2004-05-27 . chapter 7Oh, I'd love to see more about Bella and Rob! Please do write more, and I don't think it matters whether if you post them in the story, or post them as another. Hope to see the one-shots soon! |
 Scout723 2004-05-25 . chapter 7You have to post them! Lol! I'm addicted to this story! You need to put the one-shots up! |
 Crystal Aniron 14 2004-04-23 . chapter 6 oh please i love your story wirte more |
 Scout723 2004-04-22 . chapter 6You should definetly write a sequel! I loved this story! |
 Agathy 2004-03-27 . chapter 6The end?! Oh well, this is a sweet ending anyway. Your prose is very eloquent (yes, like I said in my story The Art of Breaking Hearts) and soothing. You depicted their relationship realistically, which I enjoyed. I'm glad that Bella and Rob ended up together, and I'm interested in a sequel. Write more soon! |
 iriscristata 2004-03-09 . chapter 6Aww I loved it! Cliché storyline, but somehow you made it special. Very sweet, and please do write a cute sequel! Wonderful job. |
 Alex 2004-03-09 . chapter 6 oh! yes, yes, yes! you HAVE to have a sequel...please! |
 skimmboardergurl 2004-03-09 . chapter 6 ooh, thanks for updating! love it! keep it up! |
 LeoLea85 2004-02-28 . chapter 5Ahh! No! You can't do this to me! In a hoarse voice "You've gotta...update...son..." |