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Stiller-Nacht
2007-04-29
ch 6,
abuse...people can be kind of dumb no? Perhaps at this point its pretty obvious that Tru is the main character?? uh duh...I do think maybe a chaper herre and there with the others in it would be good but yeah, Tru is the main character...


and someone m4eva is too chicken to leave a real name...
the author....
2007-04-29
ch 1, anon.
abusematsuwhateveryourname is: The story is being rewritten so I will be focusing on more of the characters when I do...and if you haven't noticed...Tru is the main character...
Matsujun4eva!
2007-04-18
ch 6, anon.
abuseTru this, Tru that...you've been paying too much attention to Tru, and only a miniscule portion to the other elementals. Personally, I like the earth elemental better.
symbiotic
2007-03-06
ch 1,
abuseFire Water Earth Air very nice job. You speak German because I'm fluent. Really nice job.
YJanZ-Providence
2006-05-09
ch 7,
abuseNice chapter; it makes me interesed in reading more. I've decided to read one chapter each day in order for me to enjoy it more. I'll add this to my favorite stories if I haven't already.

BTW, Angel's Halo has been updated with its final chapter, so yay! Congrats on reaching 100+ reviews on this story, BTW.

See ya!
Kate
2006-05-08
ch 22, anon.
abusewhoa there...mr.kalt?! I'm in suspense you need to write more...it gives me something to do when i'm bored in delaware :-(
YJanZ-Providence
2006-05-07
ch 6,
abuseWhoa... Honestly, I think Tru's dad is a bastard... Anyway, sad chapter, but I like this chapter anyway!

See ya!
shake.the.bones
2006-05-07
ch 22,
abuseYES! -bursts into tears- TACO RETURNS! -glomps- It's about time, my sistah! Welcome back, girlie, WELCOME back.

- Aeleice.
YJanZ-Providence
2006-05-07
ch 5,
abuseNice chapter, really, really cool story! I'm not too good with making reviews, am I? All I could think after reading this is cool story!

See ya!
Darket
2006-05-06
ch 22,
abuseThank you! I am honored to have a chapter dedicated to me. When I first started to write the Drifter, I looked at this and said, "Damn, she's a pro. I'll never beat this."

Well, I"m up there now! I feel great! I hope you finish this, but yes this was a short chap. Oh well.

Thank you for all the reviews! PEACE!

PEACE!

Darket
Darket
2006-05-05
ch 21,
abuseCongrats, this is my 420th review (a lucky number) and I love this story. Congrats
Darket
2006-05-05
ch 20,
abuseExcellence is bliss. Please continue when you get the chance
Darket
2006-05-05
ch 17,
abuseTHe show must go on... And it will! I will finish this by Saturday night! I promise! Congratulations, here's your hundredth review. Remember me!

I'm thrilled to beat a hundred too, so it's exciting we did it a day apart. Peace.
Darket
2006-05-04
ch 16,
abuseExcellent. I'm almost done, hell yeah! I promise to have it done by tonight. Great story.

Oh, since you say you like the Beatles, I wrote an essay concerning the "Paul is Dead" mystery and what real and fake about it. If you like the Beatles, I'd reccomend it. The truth is, I am the Walrus.

Peace
Darket
2006-05-04
ch 14,
abusesorry it's taking me so long to read this. Thank you for the reviews! I am so psyched that I'm now at 100! This is the best day of my life at fictionpress, I need to finish, and I love you! You rock! Thank you! (I hope this doesn't creep you out!)

Thank you for the reviews! Yeah! Rock on! I love the Beatles too! I was going to post the lyrics to Across the Universe, but Free as a Bird really fit the blanks perfectly.

This story is still great, and for helping me break 100, I promise to go through and read every chapter by Saturday!

Thank you for being with the Drifter ever since it began...

Peace!

Love!

Triangle!

-Darket
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