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aqua-angel
2005-08-30
ch 4,
abuseHeyaz~!! -__- Jean-Claude is just fine. I sent him back to BoyToys Inc because he annoyed me too much with his femininty or however you spell it. Gosh. How's Bob by the way? I hope you are treating him well *snickers* And dude, what did I say at Red Robin? I can't seem to remember lolz.

Ah yes... North Star. I'm going to try to update all of the stories before summer ends, which is only a few weeks. There's so many other things I gotta do xD

Good update *shudders* it was pretty creepy. Talk about gruesome! There were some typos here and there but nothing you can't fix. I liked the dream scene, I could picture it in my mind (not that that's what i wanted... *shudder*) That was a nifty way to end it tho... when the woman's voice was like "Wake up". Nicely done, the transition ^^ I really like the dream sequence. As for the agents, I don't quite have an opinion on them yet. We'll just have to wait and see what happens after.

Raised to Kill needs to be updated! *grins* I can't wait for the update~ I love the story. You need to tell me about the guys *drool* they sound so hott! *sizzles* hehe but yes, they need to make another appearance. You shouldn't waste their hotness! *chants* UPDATE! UPDATE! UPDATE!

*winks* can't wait to start the project. We need to think of a title ^^ And well, the plot hahaha

Take care! Keep on writing!
aqua-angel
2004-12-05
ch 3,
abuseomygosh... dude, it's been like monthS since you updated this story! I can't believe its just NOW that I'm reviewing *frowns* I wonder why I never got your author alerts... *sighs* anyways, great update. Very creepy *shudder* definitely giving me the chills... *another shudder* so how are you right now? drawing? when are you gonna update Raised to Kill? This one's a pretty interesting one, curious on the plot. Should update it :D Well, we should hang out some time. TTYL! Keep on writing!
lost-spiritz
2004-11-15
ch 2,
abuseDid I reveiw this chapter? Oh and by the way this is still lostspirit00 I just changed it. Yeah you wana know what's sad is that it took me soo long to figure out if this was you or not. Anywhoo I like the switch aroo and I call you to let you know more.
Queen of dawn
2004-08-02
ch 2,
abuseThis story is good ;) the first chap was kinda short but the second chap payed it off. hope to read more!!
Dream and Write
2004-04-28
ch 1,
abuseWell done. Keep up the good storylines. I love the character interaction. This is very well done. I’d like to invite you to a writing forum. I hope you enjoy the community and share some of your interesting works.
http://ucps.proboards30.com/
lost-spiritz
2004-04-23
ch 1,
abuseHey! You haven't posted chapter two up yet. I'm telling you that this is a great start! I think this draws you into the book and revels something about the character. Keep going there isn't to many people that write in this style.
aqua-angel
2004-02-09
ch 1,
abuseWow, nicely done, I applaud you. *claps* looks like this story is attracting some attention *grins* rather creepy-ish but definitely has potential. I love the different perspective on this story, and your summary is very eye-catching *winks* I love the originality of the chappie and plot, hopefully you'll update soon. *sighs* school sux, but hey, at least break is next week. Don't forget to update Raised to Kill! Laterz :)
sky77
2004-02-09
ch 1,
abuseHello!
OOh, nice new story you have here. I'm wondering, though, what inspired you to do this? If it's like me and aqua-angel's abandoning old projects and starting new ones upon sudden inspiration, then...O.O
But anyway, keep writing! I also see much potential in this.
See ya!
Endless Nightmares
2004-02-09
ch 1,
abuseHello-
This was excellent, creepy, and yet short.
I see potential, and I think its going to turn out great.
A bit more, and it will be great. :D
Whispers In Silence
PencilWolf
2004-02-09
ch 1,
abuseThat was odd... Could use some tweaking and a bit more explaining on what might have happened, but hey, I don't know if this thing is going to be a chapter story or not yet, so just write more! Reading fun...
MorbidMan
2004-02-09
ch 1,
abuseDamn strange and damn good. Keep writing.
atreju
2004-02-08
ch 1,
abuseInteresting perspective; I love the ending of her laying down inside of his body, I've never heard or thought of that before; very original! Keep writing, you have much to say...
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