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| braindead1345 2006-07-23 ch 1, | This was well written,and I liked at the end where she just seems to give up,nice imagerary. If you dont mind me asking,what is Stockholm Syndrome? |
| DarthWilt 2005-07-26 ch 1, | This story was really good. I hope you update more chapters soon. |
| zagato 2004-03-27 ch 1, | cool story. |
| TRF-Chan 2004-02-27 ch 1, | o_O My OLD username is the one it shows...oh well. This was really good, BG. It kind of creeped me out, the whole Stockholm Syndrome thing, but I'm pretty sure it was supposed to. You're a great writer, you can write humor like OFUD, then turn around and write something like this. Sadly, I haven't quite perfected that ability -_-'. Keep writing, ~TRF |
| Ruairidh 2004-02-09 ch 1, | hey, this is really good. are you going to continue? if so, I hope you update soon! keep up the good work! |
| lioness2004 2004-02-09 ch 1, | good story, you should try not double space everything. Also trying using a technique called word wrap. When it reaches the margins of apage it brings it to a new line automatically, but it is a good story. Keep up the good work |