I hope you post chapter 5 soon!

Good descriptions, creative names, great sentance structure/grammer/spelling...and all that good stuff.

Hey! Another good chappy. I'm sorry I didn't review sooner... :'( I meant to but I was in a HUGE hurry when I read this before and I'm sorry. I feel bad... Anywhen it's a great chapter. One suggestion though, try to add a bit more detail. I have been trying to do that with my stories but I don't know if it shows. *_* I hope it does, but anyway talking about you again. Yeah it is a good chapter and I hope you update soon!
Saharian

Great Chap!
Sorry i didn't review sooner!
PLZ UPDATE SOON!

Hey!
This sounds interesting!
PLZ Continue soon!

The intro is nice, I like it. ^_^
Skyller's name is nice =D and oh yeah, you're good at describing the scenes. ^_^
I'll read the other chapter next time, I'm off to do something. >_< Do update fast! =D

Wow, you are an excellent writer! I love some of the diverse names that you use, I always try to do that too. Great job! Update soon!! :)
Saharian

Wow, I really love the names you pick, that's always a really hard part. Davina is clearly my favorite. Excellent job! I'm very impressed with your writing skills!