o! yay! happy.
but: I HATE IT WHEN PEOPLE MIX UP THEIR "THERES"!
"Their" is posseive plural.
"There" refers to a place.
"They're" replaces They are. As in a state.
Argh! You always use "their" when you should use "they're."
okay, I'm done ranting now.
blagh. stupid TRM to do... cool chapter, tho. cya

...stupid head. (Griffin)
It was a better chapter than last time. hmm. this is weird, to say to you, but... more action? please?

good, but not as exciting as last chapter. hmm... no ofense, but I would watch your grammar a little- you left out a couple of words here & there-
FYI: It was kinda predictable. (I know you don't like predictable stories, so..) Well.. what else to say? It was o.k. overall.

GRAMMER GRAMMER GRAMMER! tHE REST WAS FINE, THOUGH. hURRAH FOR sPETESY-POO.

oh! buthead! Why another cliffhanger? You are too good at writing cliff hangers! argh!!
anyway.. YAY! WRITE MORE!
yeah.. it sounds much more like your writing style now, not so depressing and vauge. :) Good writing. Yay!

um... very interesting. a little dreary, but good.