Dark? yes.
Morbid? maybe.
Scary? to some.
True? Definitely.
Great job.

so very true! i always feel like this! i really love the poem and i also love your s/n (i love roses) well, bye
-fio

in my world u r writer god
*exageration* but never the less you are a very gifted and talented (repetitive aren't I?) writer u truly put me to shame
I especially like the format that you have on it

I don't like pity either, especially from strangers. . .they know nothing about you and yet they. . .nvm or i'l ramble again.
Your poem was beautiful and powerful. I've added you to my Fav author's. I only hope my writing can be as good as yours.
Keep writing-

hey, sometimes it can't be helped if people feel pity for the other person and it actually burns when you don't have the power to comfort that person and it feels helpless. it can't be helped sometimes, you know. just my opinion. your poem was moving and beautiful. keep up the good work. peace. =)