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| lux perpetua 2004-02-15 ch 1,   | This is a very interesting first chapter. You've really captured the barbaric beauty of the Norsemen's nature. (as an irish person, I don't really cheer vikings on, but I will make an exception here!) I think it will be interesting to see how Leda's love of battle will be altered or supplanted by a new love. Could you take a look at my story? It's called Chancery Court: A Romance, though it's actually a fantasy/thriller - I was aiming for the medieval romance, with wonder and mystery. It's set in the Victorian times, and features, among others, a vengeful schoolmistress, a rebellious aristocrat, and a beautiful gypsy hoping for a better life. I think you'll enjoy it! |