wow...that's true, it should be a song. In fact...hey, can I use this poem and see what me and my boys can get? I promise I'll credit you...I can almost hear the music.

Rock on, keep smiling.

Debbie x

It's pretty good. As a matter of fact, from the few poems of yours I've taken time to look at, they all show some talent. Keep writing, you could publish books with these. :)

Wow I really like this poem. and you should make it into a song. it would be kool wel depending on the music i guess. but the lyrics of a song are what get me. so yeah you rock. lol

"Watch the horror without eyes;
You feel a hunger that death defies.
The screaming, the crying, the death without dying,
The hopelessness the sorrow, the waiting for tommorrow."
I like this bit a lot. You seem to have quite a talent for writing poetry.
And thanx for reviewing my story!

Love the images you paint with this one, good moral! Laterz got only 30 secs to spare! ah must go! buh bye!