How did I not read this until fifteen minutes ago? *is confused* Oh well. I like it. You can really get into it...soap opera style almost, but higher quality obviously. You know, I just realised that you're a complete alcoholic. Don't you agree?
-Beckie
xx

I read this ages ago, but totally forgot to review- and I'm trying to catch up on what I've got here. Anyway, it's brilliant- so amazingly you. Your spirit shines through in every word you've written here- it's not just an anonymous piece. Really, excellent, even if today I am shite at the whole reviewing thing.

Yay!
It's over, after many a turn...
*sniffs* was great while it lasted
-carrie

This has such an amazing plot, and a twist at every turn. You really could turn this into a full-blown novel...
Awaiting next chapter...
-Carrie

Great job so far. I really like all the relationships you've created and the dialogue is fantastic. I love it!
Cheers :)

Hey, it's a very good start, can't wait for the next chapter!