hey! this is a really interesting poem! It's really short but it still seems to convey a lot of emotion! I also like how you wrote different versions.. my favorite's the first one I think..it seems more powerful somehow.. Anyways, good job!
~Aisatsana
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Interesting dream very descriptive and I like the wording. Keep it up!

I loved it! my fav kind of poem, dreams! u did an exellent job!keep it up~
~Never the same~