Hi,

this poem was great.

It left me feeling despressed though because that is what I sometimes think love it.

Really good job!

Aww, the ending is sad..( *Tear* Good job tho..my favorite line is.. "You're stringing me up like a china doll, leave to dust and live no more."

Good. Another great piece of art. Your imagery is always so amazing-you haven't failed to astound me yet again, with this poem. I really love the phrase "the dangerous species". Very appropriate. Keep up the great work!
C.M.

I thought that this poem was thoughtful and longing. I like how you worded this.
Happy writing!
Tk.T

Very nice, and you're right: unexpected.

i'm lovin it man seriously. i think it needs abit more explanation.. it was a bit short...

wow, you have been busy while i've been away. ill try to catch up! this is so you, cryptic and emotional. its rife with passion and a feeling of generally being overlooked i derived that from the 'china doll' line brilliantly followed up with the glimmer of hope line, glad to see your still on form! brilliant work as per..

very sad and true... the last stanza is the best... great poem

Hmm...your right, it's different then the title - or atleast what I expected.
I liked it..
[BabY Gia]