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Reviews For: Forsaken
Phyllis Joy Wolfe 2009-03-26 . chapter 1
M, sad. I hope you intend to continue this one.
Agathy 2004-02-14 . chapter 1
Hey, I stopped by your profile to read more of your work. I am so honored to be mentioned in your profile (seriously). This story's title caught my eye because I'm working on a novel by the same name (although it's just the shortened version)...but anyway, onto the review! I just wanted to let you know that I am a fan of yours. You write like a professional fantasy writer (which is rare, especially here on FictionPress.Com, where there are a ton of sleazy romances). Your fluency is amazing...your writing makes me want to start reading the dictionary again. Lol. But this is certainly no ordinary vampire-related story...if FictionPress would allow more than two subgenres for a story, I would classify this as Fantasy- Action/Adventure/Angst/Romance. Haha, all right. The ending is sad...well, it's bittersweet, which I don't mind. I hope you intend to continue this, because it's excellent. And are you going to add more to To Steal the Sun? I enjoyed that one very much as well =) Now please update soon...ack, I'm procrastinating as well. This is a pretty long review (I seem to be leaving more of them these days), but that's fine, because it's for a great story. Keep writing!
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