Well, this was a very interesting little thing. How funny. *falls over laughing* Not much to say. There are some little things in here like It said she fell asleep on the floor and got out of bed, realizing she was on the floor. Anyway, other than those few grammer mistakes, it's hilarious.
happy hunting,
~Midnight Predator~

Heheh, jitter-bo? Yeah.! That was very good wrtiing, althought it had a bad ending and all but I like it

it is a bit confusing but i liked it over all...i enjoyed the names of the places and especially this...“Angryangrybadplace,” he said with a saddened look.“Oh... The people there aren’t very nice,” she said with a tsk...lol

Haha! I am reviewing you can not yell at me! *dances* KATT! I can't find that story and if I can't find that story then I can't review it... *cries* .. what am I going to do... Oh, eating Jord's candy until I get fat and rolls away sounds good!! *does so*

Interesting. . . weird, but interesting. 'She climbed out of bed, finding it odd that she had not fallen asleep in her bed,' is just confusing, but oh well. Anyway, cool! : D