Wow, it was interesting. Sorta cool. Sorry I haven't reviewed lately. I've sorta stopped with fictionpress since nothing's coming. Anyways, good job. Keep up the good work.
Queeny

Wow, deep stuff.

wow...that was speedy...but marvelous..rock on!

its uncanny how some can tell a whole story in very few words.Very graceful. i love the ending,like something i would write, 'man staring at- girl staring at- man' just beautiful. thank you for writing such a wonderful poem.
~Nat

Cool poem. Man in a brown sweater is good imagery; simple, but it seems like it ought to mean something, too.

~He Who Walks On All Fours

That was a pretty bizzare poem. I like your work.

weird dream but i like it!