I liked it, but I think it should end here. I believe that stories should never have a definate end. The closest thing to a definate end is death, because people keep living and growing, even as adults. Good job, though. It was cute. Definately a fave.

I think it was just the right length. and it ended right.

Wow - that was the first of your stories that I've read all the way through and it's quite quality. Totally engrossing. There are some parts that are a little rough around the edges, and the climax and conclusion felt a little less fleshed out than the opening parts. I liked it a lot though. When I become a literary agent, how about I represent you?

Hey! wow! i really liked ur story! I actually think that where u ended it was a good place - completion of conflict and stuff... but anyway! just thought i'd pop in to say, nice work!!

NO, It can't be ova. I LOVE this story and would like a sequel, but understand if ya can't. : (
~Me
P.S.
I'm glad they ended up together. It wouldn't have been right and that's the under statment. I loved how u wrote it.

I like it a lot, but i have to stop readin here. will come back later today.
~Me

Write more! No doubt about it!

I Loved the story! PLEASE write more!

Wow, that chapter was great!! Awesome job ;)

Aw. How sweet. Is that the end so soon?
Evlyn

O0o! Cliffys! Your just evil! Anyways, I love the story. You have to update soon!
Evlyn

This story was great! Did it end with chapter 4 or are more coming? Hehe, I'm glad she ended up with Trevor :)

If Cam doesn't end up with Trevor, I'm going to be really disappointed. You've got the makings of a really good story here.

Nice addition. Is it just me or is Cameron a little naive. I hope she finally sees things as they really are and I hope Hunter doesn't get in the way. That guy bugs me. Well, anyway update soon.

O0o! Poor Trevor! Nice plot development. Update soon!
Evlyn