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| Kratrz 2006-02-16 ch 6,  | abuseI think it was just the right length. and it ended right. |
| this_lullaby 2004-12-30 ch 5, anon. | abuseWow - that was the first of your stories that I've read all the way through and it's quite quality. Totally engrossing. There are some parts that are a little rough around the edges, and the climax and conclusion felt a little less fleshed out than the opening parts. I liked it a lot though. When I become a literary agent, how about I represent you? |
| Day2Dreamer 2004-09-25 ch 6, | abuseHey! wow! i really liked ur story! I actually think that where u ended it was a good place - completion of conflict and stuff... but anyway! just thought i'd pop in to say, nice work!! |
| Allie 2004-08-20 ch 6, anon. | abuseNO, It can't be ova. I LOVE this story and would like a sequel, but understand if ya can't. : ( ~Me P.S. I'm glad they ended up together. It wouldn't have been right and that's the under statment. I loved how u wrote it. |
| Allie 2004-08-20 ch 1, anon. | abuseI like it a lot, but i have to stop readin here. will come back later today. ~Me |
| Evlyn 2004-04-08 ch 6, | abuseWrite more! No doubt about it! |
| ME 2004-04-03 ch 6, anon. | abuseI Loved the story! PLEASE write more! |
| Anita Life 2004-03-04 ch 5, | abuseWow, that chapter was great!! Awesome job ;) |
| Evlyn 2004-03-04 ch 5, | abuseAw. How sweet. Is that the end so soon? Evlyn |
| Evlyn 2004-02-29 ch 4, | abuseO0o! Cliffys! Your just evil! Anyways, I love the story. You have to update soon! Evlyn |
| Anita Life 2004-02-28 ch 4, | abuseThis story was great! Did it end with chapter 4 or are more coming? Hehe, I'm glad she ended up with Trevor :) |
| Ashes of Marie 2004-02-25 ch 2, | abuseIf Cam doesn't end up with Trevor, I'm going to be really disappointed. You've got the makings of a really good story here. |
| Black Butterfli 2004-02-25 ch 2, | abuseNice addition. Is it just me or is Cameron a little naive. I hope she finally sees things as they really are and I hope Hunter doesn't get in the way. That guy bugs me. Well, anyway update soon. |
| Evlyn 2004-02-24 ch 2, | abuseO0o! Poor Trevor! Nice plot development. Update soon! Evlyn |
| Black Butterfli 2004-02-17 ch 1, | abuseI liked this story so far, too. Cameron seems nice. She sorta reminds me of Avril Lavigne. lol. Continue soon please. |