It's true... Fly away to the moon? If ONLY I could. It makes me think... Would there be a new life and a new day?

It makes you wonder if we really should be alive sometimes...we're depicted so evily here...humans are the root of evil it seems...i love your poem though
~*Arreis Kurai*~

It is sad that the world is the way it is.
W,
The Great, the Mighty, the Orc King

oh i like this one a lot. my only advice is to not over use the word "sick" but other than that this is really great. i liked how you talked about how the convict of the killed girl felt, as if he felt warm and happy to what he did. this is such a true poem in this society.

You have much talent in writing, i love this poem.

Very nice. It's so true. I don't understand how people could be so heartless and cold. Keep writing, you have talent.