|Reviews for Existence|
| darqlyte 10/10/05 . chapter 1
This one is more depressive and hopeless.
If this is your goal, you did it.
such things, should not be dwelt upon,
lest they consume you,
then ye become the willing slave
to your own decision to be,
| ing 7/25/05 . chapter 1
I love the way your poems make me think. Wonderful.
| Manju 7/24/05 . chapter 1
wow, great job again. i can relate to this one.
| Robert-Andrew-Frogg 1/12/05 . chapter 1
I have to admit that my favorite part of this poem was actually 'it doesn't really matter' simply because I love the complete... complete break from that to what does matter.
it's desolate, and it sounds... I don't know, the first time I read it, the poem sounded so hopeless, especially because of the last two lines.
I liked it.
| Infinity Plus One 12/14/04 . chapter 1
This is a good poem; I think that this blank verse style reflects the state of mind in this poem... A pondering state of mind. Well done.
| TheDevilLikesToDream 11/18/04 . chapter 1
i love that line, "the person hiding beneath my skin"..."i am left in the darkness, occupying the smallest space"... nice! )
| Princess-anna57 4/17/04 . chapter 1
Nice... Thanks for reviewing my work!
| ANGST LOL 2/23/04 . chapter 1
Aww... That's beautifully written...
| inca-dove 2/22/04 . chapter 1
OH, that was really good! I think i can actually relate to it. I like, i like!
| R.W. Zeppler 2/22/04 . chapter 1
Oh, very nice work. I really enjoyed this! Good job!