Like this one cos the lines are short and it reflects some truth in life.

I used to cry, now I just stand and stare. I don't know what's happened to me really. That's a good poem by the way, well written. Tell Florence that I would really like some "bread".

well, i think it is a good poem.
i had a question on your profile: if your FRENCH teacher is speaking a forign language, then wouldnt it be french? that would make sense...