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| siddika 2007-01-05 ch 3,   | I LOVE IT SO MUCH. |
| Aneli 2004-10-27 ch 14, | hy. i read both of ur storys and theyr really great.. im hooked... so plz write some more soon... |
| what's up world 2004-09-25 ch 14, | that was so sweet. god...i think this sequal was actually more forward in it's sexual nature than the last one. i still like it though. please update soON! |
| ItalianQT 2004-09-22 ch 14, | I am so happy that Sam and Charly are engaged now! And that the twins accepted him! Update soon! : ) |
| anatidaephobiac 2004-09-17 ch 14, | Long time, no update... ;) But it's all good... awesome chapter. Many good things. Unfortunately, I have to go now, or I'd elaborate on those things... Update soon! |
| EchoesOfReason 2004-09-17 ch 14, | Yay, great chapter it really pieced everything together and I love the comedy in it. This is going to be a short review but I understand the whole long-awaited update. Great job, take care, and good luck! Love, a.twisted.soul |
| ItalianQT 2004-06-25 ch 13, | I love this story! Update soon! : ) |
| anatidaephobiac 2004-06-24 ch 13, | good chapter... it's great that the twins accepted him so easily. and it's good that she knows he was telling the truth. will marriage me in the future? update soon! |
| EchoesOfReason 2004-06-24 ch 13, | Heh, now I'm on the edge of my seat, I love this chapter, and Sam wrote a very touching and beautiful letter, although the number was a little funny lol but it's still good. oh, now I just can't wait till the next chapter, I'm antsy now lol Summer's in and so is free time for you I hope heh. Take care, great job, and good luck! Love, a.twisted.soul |
| imablucdn 2004-06-14 ch 12, | i read this all in one sitting. all in all, good show! keep it up. I'm looking forward to the next twist. |
| ItalianQT 2004-06-10 ch 12, | Yeah!! I'm glad they're back in the present! Can't wait to see how the little kids handle the news Update soon! : ) |
| anatidaephobiac 2004-06-09 ch 12, | I was just thinking about this story earlier today... as in, when will it be updated?... and now it is... yay! and they found the diamonds. that's good. on to... rekindling the relationship, and new adventures, as you said. can't wait! update soon! |
| EchoesOfReason 2004-06-09 ch 12, | Holy DAMN I loved this chapter. It sped up the plot and got the story moving yet not too fast. It was very well written and now you've got me antsy for the next chapter! I can't say anything to describe how much I love this chapter! Well there it is, I love this chapter! =P But seriously, I was completely stunned...is Mac really dead? Such a sweet guy too! Tsk tsk...but I'm glad the truth is revealed and whew that was a long story telling thing! LOL, Chari surely can talk! It's nice how, even though they've been apart for so long, they seem to be so comfortable with each other, even though it took forever for them to get together in the first place. Okay, I'll stop now. This was a great chapter. Take care, great job, and good luck! Love, a.twisted.soul |
| ItalianQT 2004-05-27 ch 11, | Great plot so far! I can't wait for them to be back in the present either! Update soon! : ) |
| BlearyEyes 2004-05-08 ch 11, | I do so love this story - sorry I haven't reviewed before! |